A Daylight Ride

A Daylight Ride chp.24

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CHAPTER 24

"Don't worry, I have a plan" he said looking slightly hopeful

"A plan? Is it a good plan, are we going to get out of here!?!?!?!" Mark said shaking Jace's shoulders

"Get. Off. Me" Jace sneered

Mark got off Jace and glanced over at me.

I pulled the shirt over my knees further. I couldn't help but think Mark was trying to look at my body.

"Mark, if you don't stop trying to stare at Carmen's body I swear, I'll kill you in your sleep" Jace said without turning around to face Mark.

He gave me a sympathetic look

I gave him a small smile

He pulled me into his lap and started to rub my back. I relaxed a little at his touch and melted into his arms. He kissed my head

"So what your plan?" I said turning my head to look at Jace's face

"Well, I've been thinking about trying to get out for a while but I never really had a plan or a reason to leave but then you came and I knew you didn't deserve to be here, whatever the reason"

A tear left my eye and fell down my cheek

"What happened" Jace said, getting stiff. "Did something else happen when he took you

"No, but I did find out why I'm here" I said looking at Mark

Mark gave me a sorry look and looked down putting his hands in his Jacket pockets

"You did?! Well why are you here?! Why would he do something so horrible to you?!" shouted Jace

"It has to do with Mark" I said looking back at Mark

"Yeah, yeah, he gave you up, but why did his dad want to take you?!"

"I'm sorry Carmen, I really didn't know this would happen" said Mark

"No Mark, it's not your fault. It's your mom's. All of this is her fault. She's the reason Jace's dad is so horrible and the reason that were all here"