Hi guys, I would really appreciate some feedback on the last few chapters. Also, I was kinda disappointed about this chapter, I wanted it to be a little longer but I couldn't think of anything else to put in it. There's this one idea I have but I'm still not sure about it, so if you guys could leave your comments saying what you want to see or if you like it or not that would be great :) also, if you want, ill recgonise my 20th fan in my next chapter of whenever they fan if you could like to, tell people to read your storues or whatever so...ya enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!
CHAPTER 18
I woke up crying in Jace's lap. After what happened with Mark, I often woke up like this. It had been a week since that happened and I still didn't have the guts to tell him I loved him. At times I felt so stupid for not telling him but at other times I doubted if he loved me too and if I should tell him. He was stroking my hair and cheek
"Are you awake?" he whispered
"Y-yeah" I sobbed
"Shh, it's ok, don't cry" he said continuing to stroke my head.
Jace was always like this, he was caring of my feelings as I was of his. We needed each other if we were going to get through this so we were always there to defend each other and help each other through this no matter what happened. We were both in the same situation and we were going to get nowhere if we didn't help each other. He had been even more sensitive of my feelings after what happened with Mark. He hadn't brought up that I had said I loved Jace to Mark and I was kind of glad but at the same time disappointed
"Do you want to sit up? You've been lying like this for fourteen hours, your neck is probably going to hurt" he said starting to rub my neck
"Alright" I said getting up slowly. The small window up about five stories above our heads shone a faint light into the cell. I scooted off of his lap and moved to sit facing him.
"Carmen, did they beat you last night?" he asked looking at the spot my butt had just been at.
"No, why? I was with you last night?" I asked looking where he was
"There's a little pool of blood where you were sitting" he said grimacing. "Are you sure it wasn't from something they did to you recently or something from what happened with Mark?"
"Yeah, they haven't beaten me all week. I don't know what... aww shit!" I said putting my hands on my head. "Jace, do you know what day it is?"I asked keeping my head down. This was just awesome. Note sarcasm
"I think it's the fourteenth" he said putting his hand on my shoulder
"Perfect" I mumbled. I really didn't need this to happen now.
"Why, what's...oh, are you having girl issues?" he asked. I wasn't looking at his face but I could tell he felt uncomfterable asking
"Yeah" I mumbled
He pulled me into his lap and rubbed my back
"It's ok, it happens to every girl, you shouldn't worry about it"
"Jace, I'm going to satin your pants" I mumbled into his shirt. How could he be so calm about this?
"I don't care" he said continuing to rub my back
"Jace, please, I don't want to gross you out, I'm on my freaking period and you don't care if I bleed on your pants!" I said raising my voice and taking my head out of his chest
"Carmen, I don't care if you're on your period or if you ruin my pants, they're just pants and they're ruined already and even if they weren't I wouldn't care. Carmen, you don't need to worry about things like this, it happens, you can't do anything about" he said looking at me with his blue eyes. I could see something else flash in them but it faded
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