Book title: ATLANTIA: Rise Of Rebellion
Author: Yanzieyy
Reviewer: Xhsxohs123456
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Review
Score: 9/10
DESCRIPTION: The description was perfect. It is short as to not reveal the plot and remains mysterious. It catches the reader's attention and makes them want more. A very smart move to include reviews from other shops as it makes the reader think it is worth their time.
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING: I was really surprised that even if it is an unedited version it didn't have a lot of grammatical or spelling errors. Slight errors that I'm sure would be fine after a revision.
WRITING STYLE: I loved the writing style. Fantasy genre lovers need description andyou have done an amazing job at it. Every scene paints a picture, it shows you where and how it is taking place as if you are in the book itself. I read a solid ten chapters for any review but for this book I didn't even realize when I reached the thirteenth chapter and trust me there was nothing more than just another chapter I wished for. The cliffhangers leave the reader on the brink waiting for the next update.
PLOT: If you loved Harry Potter and The Narnia Chronicles then you will love the plot of this book. Atlantia is on the verge of a rebellion and our protagonist might just be the center of it all. The hope that they would be able to defeat the tyranny of the wizard emperor has finally arrived and out of all the people our protagonist is the one who is the most clueless about it.
CHARACTER DEPTH: The characters that have already been introduced have their dimensions and you can clearly point out their personalities. One thing I really liked was how the characters were true to their backgrounds and acted accordingly. I'm eager to see the individual growths of the side characters as well.
OVERALL REVIEW: Need a new world with rebellion on the horizon? Welcome to Atlantia. It is a great book so far and I would love to read more. My only suggestions would be pay a little more attention to the tenses while writing and try not to dwell a lot into the descriptions as it can get exhausting for a reader sometimes. Overall I loved it and I would definitely continue reading!
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