Book Title: The Sun that I see is named after you
Author: @cattleyaon5th
Reviewer: @RunasheRea
🌺 Description 🌺
The description is beautifully written, it grabs the readers' attention and leaves them curious about what happens next.
🌺 Grammar: 9/10 🌺
There are somes errors, misused punctuations, and homonyms, that is, when words are spelled the same and sound the same but have different meanings. It can make it confusing to understand what do you mean.
🌺 Spelling errors: 9/10 🌺
There are not a lot but they are there, but if it bothers, you can go and get it edited.
🌺 Plot: 10/10 🌺
I love how the story flows as a short story. It is important to give as much information as possible while keeping in mind that the story has to develop. You did a wonderful job.
🌺 Content of your book: 10/10 🌺
The characters' personalities are my favorite, how they balance and feed on each other's energy. Your writing style makes the story a lot interesting to read. Keep up the good work :)
(but as you stated English is not your first language, l suggest to get someone to edit it for you)
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