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Story name:- Pyaar aur Nafrat Ka khel
Author's name:- DebotriMukherjee
Reviewer's name:- _oceanicava__
Title:- The title is perfect for the story.. but as it's in Hindi.. the foreigners may not get attract to your story..so I'll suggest you to write something in English (bcz it's a global language).
Cover:- Great cover. But I have suggested a better cover for your story..do check in your comments.
Blurb:- I love it. It simple yet very intriguing. I'll suggest you if ever win any award , do mention Them in the blurb section. It'll attract more people.
Plot&flow:- For the plot I'll give you a 9.5/10 , because there's always a room for improvement. And for the flow, it's perfect. I loved all those cliffhangers. Keep it up.
Character development:- I love your character development. It's nice. Nandini's character is very strong and courageous. I loved it. And those twins...omg they totally stole my heart.
Grammatical errors and spelling issues:- I saw some minor grammatical errors and typos. I suggest you to read the story thoroughly..
Overall impression:- This story has a good potential. Just try to go through the points I mentioned and you'll see the Magic. But try to update more often and regularly.
Ratings:- 3.5/5
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