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story name:- PANDORA DAORA
author's name:- Cxptured_heart
Reviewer's name:- _oceanicava__
Title:- The title is very unique, simple but elegant and an eye-catcher, just like how it should be. But the sample word is literally killing it's beauty.
Cover:- what a great cover...it's really a masterpiece of art. I absolutely love it. Where did you get this Hun? However, I just want you to work on its fonts...they can make your cover more beautiful.
Blurb:- the blurb is good, but it's giving away too much information, like Chichi is a witch. Try to make it more mysterious and full of suspense. The readers shouldn't know any information from the blurb section.
Plot and flow:- For the plot I'll give you 10/10. It's really interesting to read about a game turned out be a demon and Chichi-Estron's chemistry is already giving the readers a cute couples goal. The flow is nice...not too fast...nor too slow.
Character development:- I didn't see much character development...but also we're in the beginning of the story...soo let's see what happens in future.
Grammatical errors and spelling issues:- I saw some minor grammatical errors and typos. I suggest you to read the story thoroughly...and try to edit this ASAP.
Overall impression:- this story has a great potential... just work on the points , I've mentioned above...and you'll see the magic.
Suggestions:-
1. Try to change the font of the cover.
2. Check the grammar and spelling errors.
3. Work on the blurb.
4. Try to update regularly.
Ratings:- 3.5/5
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