Cook&Chill - A Land of Ralosia Story by @Sanch250

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Book Title: Cook&Chill - A Land of Ralosia Story
Author: @Sanch250
Reviewer: @RunasheRea

🌺 Description 🌺
It's an informative description and helps the reader to get a better understanding of the book.

🌺 Grammar: 10/10 🌺
There were grammatical errors that stood out.

🌺 Spelling errors: 10/10 🌺
No spelling errors.

🌺 Plot: 9/10 🌺
Choose a point of view. A fantasy novel or fantasy series can play out in third-person via an omniscient narrator, or first-person through the eyes of one character or many. While the first approach lets you distribute out the details, however, you please allow your characters to lead, means your readers will discover the world as in their journey, building in suspense and surprise.

🌺 Content of your book: 10/10 🌺
Creating characters of your own in an enchanted world or different realm is an amazing work, creating them with their own unique characteristics takes a lot of creative dedication, you did an amazing job. If you can literally sketch your characters, do so—if not, write down everything you can about them. "Interview" your characters by asking each of them a standard set of questions about their motives, emotions, habits, and history.

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