Title: Blueberry Milkshake
Author: @that_blondie_girl_29
Reviewer: @KiaraWinters5
🦋Description🦋(+Synopsis and aesthetics): I like the description. It's short and sweet, but I would recommend a bigger and proper one because that's what initially attracts the readers. The synopsis made me curious about the story and made me want to read it. And I loved the aesthetics! Good job.
🦋Grammar/Spelling Mistakes🦋: There are some grammatical errors and a few spelling mistakes, so you might want to edit those.
🦋Plot and characters🦋: I like the plot so far. You might want to highlight the flashback chapters in some way though. Like maybe a little note on top or write it in italics.
🦋Content and Writing🦋: I like your writing style, but there was a little confusion due to the past to present transition thing. I love the main character and how she doesn't take any crap from the guy. She is headstrong and knows what she wants. I like her confidence and that she doesn't let her emotions come in between deciding what's right for her. Great job on the characters!
🦋Rating🦋: Overall, I'd give it 8.7/10. The grammar mistakes bothered me a bit, but other than that, it's really good!
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