Book tittle: GuiTara
Author: ghlo_riyah
Reviewer: RunasheRea
Description: Character description is a type of writing that gives the reader information about a character. This information might be related to the character's visual appearance, or it might give the reader a better sense of their personality or background. You did exactly that in yours. It makes me want to know more. It makes a reader curious about what happenes next.
Grammar: 10/10
Your grammar is flawless.
Spelling errors: 7/10
They are a few, although noticeable when reading, but they don't affect the story at all. If you are a perfectionist, you would go through the book again and edit them.
The Plot: 10/10
You have all the five elements needed where you introduce your characters, establish the setting, and begin to introduce the primary conflict of your story. Rising actions, you want to continue to build your story until the reader is ready to reach the point where everything comes crashing down. Climax, the point in the story that everything changes, or where your main character is forced to make a life-altering decision. It should be the point where the reader is unsure where your story is going to go next. Falling Action is the time to start resolving conflicts and subplots so your story doesn’t feel rushed in the last few chapters. This is also where any conflicts that arose as a result of the climax can start being resolved. Resolution is the end of your story where you can tie up the final loose ends and bring your story to its happy or tragic ending. Or, if you’re writing a series, now would be the time to write a cliffhanger and leave them eager for the next installment!
Content of your book: 10/10
It's a great read. l couldn't put it down. Keke is one of my favorite characters. She has an amazing personality and she very smart too "you have a crush on Mr Grey eyes". It's funny lighthearted, and has some good lessons as well.
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