Book tittle: The Plan
Author: angiexvi
Reviewer: RunasheRea
Description:
It gives a more depth and credibility by allowing readers to imagine the physical world and characters a writer has created.
Grammar: 7/10
Short paragraphs call a lot of attention to themselves, so they can effectively emphasize a point. However, too many long paragraphs can provide readers with too much information to manage at one time. Balance that out when editing. Some of the punctuation marks like the full stop or period and commas are placed incorrectly.
Spelling errors: 9/10
They are few but not noticeable errors.
The Plot: 8/10
A story happens because a pattern is interrupted. If you are writing about a day that is like any other day, it is most likely a routine, not a story. Your plot and flow needs adjustments which l am sure you will see when editing.
Content of your book: 7/10
Writing a novel based in a different century has its pros and cons. It's unique but hard to stay in that time frame without adding present day issues and opinions. I'm sure you have done your research, just make sure the tone and experiences go with the timeline you choose.
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