Book tittle: Not What You Expected
Author: dallas1213
Reviewer: RunasheRea
Description: The description is nicely written but it could use a question at the end to give it more of an edge.
Grammar: 10/10
There are no grammatical errors as far as I have read.
Spelling errors :10/10
Your spelling is amazing. It makes the story enjoyable to read.
The Plot: 10/10
The story flows so well. The way you introduced the characters are written so well that it doesn't drag out but get the ball rolling. To to say, it gives us a little insight to their personalities.
Content of your book: 9/10
The book has a lot of elements too. It's serious at the same time lighthearted, but very entertaining. The characters have very strong personalities. l personally think Riley Jane. She is funny but that's just her way of dealing with how her life is going. You have a unique way of writing. It makes it easy to keep reading.
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