Book tittle: Avenging Antonio
Author: Bloomfalls
Reviewer: RunasheRea
Description: The description is nicely written. It gives just enough information but still leaves a reader curious.
Grammar: 8/10
The use of malapropism; the mistaken use of a word in place of a similar-sounding one, although it's not a lot, but it is still noticeable and polysyllabic are present.
Spelling errors: 10/10
Your spelling is amazing.
The Plot: 10/10
The conflict should get more and more tense and exciting. The tension was able to reach a high point or “climax” near the end of the story, then ease off. You have included the basic steps of a plot when conflict begins, things go right, things go wrong, final victory (or defeat), and wrap‑up. The way you left it at the end leave room for a sequel or for the reader to imagine what will happen next and come up with their own ending.
Content of your book: 10/10
The book was well written. You covered what needs to be covered, you let the character's develop in a fluid manner but did not rush with unrealistic expections. Davinas growth is something to pay attention to as a main character.
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