Book Title: The Throne of the Four Realms
Author: @sharmee_m
Reviewer: @RunasheRea
🌺 Description🌺
The description is nicely written and gives just enough information, but still keeping you curious, making the emotional connection between the reader and the fantastical subject matter, the presence of thought provoking content, and the ability to pull the reader into the fantasy world is important.
🌺 Grammar: 9/10 🌺
There are no mistakes at first glance but it would benefit you to edit them out.
🌺 Spelling errors: 10/10 🌺
No noticeable spelling errors.
🌺 Plot: 10/10 🌺
Write authentic dialogues. Your styles of speech for respective characters can tell a lot about their moods and motivations, as well as their cultural origins within the civilization you've created. Rather than to cram unnatural amounts of exposition into the conversation, use action to advance the plot while treating dialogues as an opportunity to convey a better sense of who your characters are. Read and reread-you can write as well as read. Study the classics of the fantasy genre, take notes of what grabs your attention for each fantasy author's approach-for example, world-building, character development, or plot twists-and how the storyteller navigates the aspects you find most daunting. You can reread your favorite fantasy books while applying the same lens.
🌺 Content of your book: 10/10 🌺
Make-and keep-rules. Even the most epic fantasy has to be grounded in its own reality so that it feels believable.
It's enchanting to say the least that the world you have created is magical. The characters are special in their own way with funny personalities.
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