Book Title: Even Angels fall from the sky.
Author: -gorgeously-valerie
Reviewer: Xhsxohs123456
Disclaimer: I am only one person. I guarantee you my opinion will not be the same as someone else's and that is a 100% okay. I am never trying to offend or discourage anyone. My only goal is to help you improve your story the best I can.
~Harry
Review
Score: 9.5/10
DESCRIPTION: A marvelous way to start. I love the way you added a quote in the description, it is impactful and catches the reader's attention. The description teases the reader with just enough amount of information that is needed to make them start reading the story.
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING: I was glad to see that there were next to no grammar or spelling errors.
WRITING STYLE: For me it is hard to be totallyhooked in a book and forget about my surroundings while this book made me dojust that. I'll be honest it was confusing for the first two chapters but afterthat I couldn't stop myself from turning the pages. The writing style is alittle different than what is generally in a fantasy genre book yet wonderful and addictive in every way.
PLOT: Perfection is self-abuse of the highest order. The story touched my heart with the way it dealt with the sensitive issue of finding one's true self. Hauntingly beautiful expressions of several emotions and mindsets, made me want to just jump in and save everyone from themselves. The concept of perfection is an over rated one and if you agree with this then this book is totally for you.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: This is one of the very few times when I have been fully satisfied by the development of the characters. Each character was true to their plot. There was not even one moment where I felt that the character acted in a way that is totally not possible in the given situation.
I have to mention the way Milare's character has been developed is wholesome. The journey from trying to be the epitome of perfection for the world to someone conflicted and in a place of identity crisis and further into someone finding what they truly want is expressed beautifully. A change that is not fast and unrealistic but a gradual one like it should be.
Even the other characters grow on you with the way they make their way into a three dimensional form.
OVERALL REVIEW: A journey to self-love made on the road of world's expectations will notlead you to your destination. You need a path which is self-designed and the guts to form one. If you need characters you can relate to, who are confused and trying their best to understand what they are then welcome to heaven, hell and to all that lies in between. A perfect read for fantasy lovers looking for an original plot line.
I loved it and would definitely continue reading it!
P.S We all live in the grey, the world isn't perfect so why should we be <3
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