The Carnation Review Shop

1) @Cxptured_heart (ON HOLD)

ABOUT THE REVIEWER: Cxptured_heart

Hey there, my name is Naomi. I'm a sassy, introverted, unique, short tempered, sarcastic teenager. I'd kill for Miraculous; the tale of Ladybug and Cat noir, wouldn't we all?

WHY YOU SHOULD HIRE ME:

If you hire me, I would take my time and read your book thoroughly, point out your mistakes, things I think you should work on, and other necessary things to help you better your work. I wouldn't sugarcoat my review to make you feel good, neither would I point out mistakes in a way that would make you feel bad. I'm friendly, so come to mama, baby!

But remember, you have to be patient with me because I have a life outside of Wattpad. Though I'm mostly online, but sadly I do have a real life.

I) PERSONAL RULES AND PAYMENT:

1. Give Cxptured_heart a permanent follow.

2. Give any or both of my books a shout out on your message board.

3. Give any of my books a read, vote and comment (leave your sincere thought). Note: Actually read my book, don't just vote and comment 'nice', because mama knows what fake comments are like. Read at least four chapters and let me know the book you read.

II) ACCEPTED GENRES:

➷Romance
➷Poetry
➷Short story
➷Paranormal
➷Horror
➷Mystery/thriller
➷Humour
➷Fantasy
➷Teen Fiction
➷Non-fiction
➷Historical fiction
➷General Fiction
➷Fan fiction (strictly Miraculous, Henry Danger and Avengers).

III) REJECTED GENRES:

➷Spiritual
➷Werewolf
➷Vampire
➷Action/adventure
➷Science fiction

IV) ACCEPTS MATURE BOOKS?

Yeah, I don't mind.

V) ACCEPTS LGBTQ BOOKS:

No, I do mind.

VI) NUMBER OF CHAPTERS THAT WILL BE READ:

Five chapters and above. But the 'above' depends on my mood, how intriguing your book turns out to be, and if I get a crush on your character (I'm reading your book straight to the very end). Since I will be reading five chapters and above, I expect your submitted books (excluding poetry and short story) to have at least five chapters, including prologue.

VII) JUDGING CRITERIA:

These would be my focus on your book; the Title, Cover, Summary, Grammar/vocabulary, Character development, Writing style/Creativity, Message, Plot development, and Personal enjoyment. Overall: /100

My reactions to your scores:

{90-100} ~ Excellent! I'm in tears.

{70-89} ~ Very Good! I'm wowed.

{50-69} ~ Good! Thumbs up.

{30-49} ~ Fair! Try harder.

{10-29} ~ Come on, you can do better!

{0-9} ~ You submitted a blank page (-_-)

If you've made it this far, the password is sassygirl. You will need to fill it together with the form.

VIII) FORM:

{Username: -}
{Book Title: -}
{Genre: -}
{Lgbtq+: -}
{Number or chapters: -}
{Want the result via PM or posted here?: -}
{Followed the rules?: -}
{Password: -}
{Tags: (at least 5) -}

Done reviewing your book, right? If you don't mind, could you please rate me [From 1 (lowest) - 5 (highest)] here? >>

Cxptured_heart's Queue:

1. The Chase (The Hybrid Chronicles #1). By saige_1209 ~{Result via PM} ✔

2. The Dating Proposal. By imaginator33 ~{Result posted here} ✔

3. Beautiful Chaos. By jes_uba123 ~{Result posted here} ✔

4. The Villainess. By Rhuthwrites__ ~{Result via PM}

5. Killing Romeo. By Cutebookworm123
~{Result via PM}

6. Heaven or hell. By DefinitelyNot_
~{Result posted here}

7. Conjure. By goldenroselover
~{Result posted here}

8. The unbecoming of Kiara Taylor. By vinita30 ~{Result posted here}

9. Billionaire's Seventh Wife by _ittefa_~{Pm the result}

10. The Bad Boy's crush. By ashfia67 {Pm the result}

11. Abstraction|An Anthology of Poems by Queen_bee_Mariam ~{Result via PM}

12. Trust and Daggers. By _daydreamer_girl ~{Result posted here}