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Fallen Queen. By @disha_2007

Book titles : Fallen Queen
Author : Disha_2007
Reviewer: RunasheRea

Description: The description is amazing. The way it was written adds a little mistery to the book and the main character, but it's a little too long. The fourth paragraph isn't necessary. The description is also contradicting. Like the way the character is behind closed doot. Was it on purpose or would it match as the story develops?

Grammar: solid 9/10
There were a few grammar errors that l noticed, but they're not big enough to affect a reader. They can be easily fixed.

Spelling errors: 5.9/10
They affect how a sentence or paragraph is read, but they can still be easily fixed. I suggest you read through it thoroughly.

The Plot: 9/10
The Plot is great, but the way her childhood was described could be improved, as it affects her mental health and how she responds to life situations on daily basis. l believe that it will change as the story continues. The flow, however, is a bit tricky. You have amazing phases that fit, but they have errors and some don't fit in the moment being acted out.

Content of your book: 4.9/10
The book touches on situations that are happening in real life to others. Be sensitive but also tell you story the way that reflects you as a writer. You have an amazing work of art but you also need to work on how much you reveal in a chapter. There are some chapters that could have been divided and explained more in depth.

All in all, fallen queen has great potential. l look forward to seeing it develop more, especially the characters. And if wolfe plays a big role in the story, we would need more on his back story. l like books that also give the male view of how certain things are played out. It depends on how long your book is though. A lot of reader would be interested in reading things in his perspective once in a while. Anyways, I look forward to reading more.