To be continued...
They were so close and was about to kiss 😘 but they totally forgot that romance ka dushman (Neel) is sitting there
Neel cleared his throat - Uhm... Uhmm... Bhaiya ji... Bhabhi ji... Abhi main bhi hu yahi pe... Kuch to sharam kar lo... Agar rokta nahi to kya kuch nahi kar lete... Ap yeh sab apne kamre mein karo door lock kar ke kisi ko problem nahi hogi... Yaha pe ek cute sa pyaara sa bacha bhi hai... Koi unki to fikr kar lo... Agar dekh leta to kya paap ho jaata... Hey shiv... Kaise din dikha diye... Ab yahi dekhna baaki reh gaya tha...(over dramatically)
Raavi blushed and Shiva's cheeks was red due to shyness and embarrassment
Shiva (blushing) - Tu bhul Raha hai yeh hamara hi kamra hai... Aur Raavi dekho to konsa bacha keh raha hai... Jiski girlfriend hai aur saath hi saath unki shaadi ki baat chal Rahi hai aur khud dino mein shaadi ho jaayegi...
Raavi chuckles
Neel - Haan haan theek hai... Ab itna bhi bolne ki jarurat nahi hai... Aur main to bhul gaya... Ab main mere room mein jaata hu... Aap continue karo... (Teasing) Kya pata kuch hafte mein yeh news mil jaaye ki main chacha ban ne wala hu...
Shiva gives him tapli - Abey gadhede... Akal ke dushman... Kya bol raha hai... Ab jaa apne kamre mein...
Neel - (teasing) Haan Haan jaa raha hu... Main to yaha pe ap dono ko disturb kar raha tha... Aap dono karo continue... Koi apko pareshan nahi karega aur naa to disturb aap Karo... Waise kehna padega Shiva bhabhi se boht pyaar karta hai...
Shiva - Woh kya hai na pyaar to main tujhse bhi boht karta hu (showing his hand) Dikhau kitna karta hu?
Neel - (nervously) Nahi nahi... Main jaa raha hu... Mujhe to pata hai tu mujhse pyaar karta hai... Ab main jaata hu... Haan... Good night...
ShiVi together - Good night...
Then he goes and ShiVi was in their room
Shiva - Raavi main so Raha hu tum bhi kapde change kar ke so jao...
Raavi - Wo... Mujhe tumhe kuch kehna hai
Shiva - Haan bolo na...
Raavi - Wo... Woh... Mujhe... Tu... Tumse....
Shiva - Kya hua jaldi bol na...
Raavi - I... I... Lo... Love... Y... You....
Shiva looks at her
Raavi - I am so sorry agar tumhe bura laga ho to... Par tum mujh se baat pehle jaise hi karna...
Shiva - Raa... Raavi... Mujhe pata nahi kya hua hai... Par tum jabse aayi ho na tab se aisa lag raha hai jaise koi apna hai mere saath... Jaise main akela nahi hu... Koi hai mere saath bhi... Pehle mujhe boht akela lagta tha... Par jab se tum aayi ho na tab se akela nahi lagta... Par pata nahi main bhi tumse....
Raavi - Shiva I know... Tum abhi confuse hoge... Aur hona bhi chahiye kyu ki tumhare saath jo hua hai na... Uske baad tum kisi pe bhi itni jaldi trust nahi kar paoge... Tumhe jitna time chahiye tum le lo... 3 mahine 4 mahine yaa phir ek saal hi kyu na ho... Par tum aise confusion mein mat rehna... Tumhara jab bhi jo bhi man ho tu mujhse share karna... Share karne se halka feel hota hai...
Shiva smiles looking at her
Shiva (in mind) - Kitne ache se sab ko samajhti hai...
Shiva (to Raavi) - Sure... Jab bhi mujhe kuch lagega main tumhe bata dunga... Ab na kisi ke upar na trust nahi hota...
Raavi - Main samajh sakti hu... Waise Shiva... Dekho maine abhi jo kaha us sey hamare rishte mein koi fark nahi padna chahiye I mean hum jaise dost ki tarah rehte the waise hi rahenge na? Waise bura na maano to main ek Chipkali waali harkat kar sakti hu boht man ho Raha hai aaj mera...
👆👆Its Raavi's trick how she asks for a hug agar pasand aayi ho to kehna...
Shiva - Haan Meri chipkali koi bhi fark nahi padega aur haa kar le chipkali waali harkat... Ab jab tu chipkali hai to waisi harkat to banti hai na...(chuckles)
Then Raavi goes and hugs Shiva and starts crying
Shiva (while patting her back to console her) - Kya hua Chipkali maine kaha to ki koi fark nahi padega hamare relationship mein... Ab kyu aansu baha rahi hai...
Raavi - Shiva mumma-papa ki yaad aa rahi hai... Agar meri sagi (real) maa hoti to mujhe itne dino mein ek call Kiya hota ki main kyu ghar pe nahi aayi main kaha hu kaisi hu... Par dekho mere naseeb mein hi nahi hai maa ka pyaar... Maa hai par sauteli... Jisko meri parwah hi nahi hai... Pata nahi mere papa ke jaane ke baad woh abhi bhi waisi hi hogi yaa... Shiva mujhe mumma ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai...(while sobbing)
Shiva - Raavi... Aise rote hai kya chote bache ki tarah... Tujhe pata nahi mere saath kya hua? Agar main tumhare jaisa karta to meri aankhein to suj(swollen) hi gayi hoti ro ro ke... Dekh tu ro mat... Tere mummy papa tujhe upar se dekh rahe honge na... Agar tu royegi to meri kya impression padegi unke samne? Socha hai kabhi?
Raavi - Agar main royi to usme tum kaha se beech mein aa gaye?
Shiva - Woh sochege na.... Ki haaye ram... Kaisi phooti kismat hamari bachi ki jo aisa pati mila... Raavi uske samne to rahi hai aur woh dekhta hi hai... Samjhaya bhi nahi jaata iss ladke se... Haaye kaisa pati hai yeh re...(over dramatically)
Raavi chuckles on this - Ab drama mat karo...
Shiva - Aur ab tum bhi rona bandh karo... Kyu ki agar mere kamre mein flood aa gaya na to hum to kahi so bhi nahi payenge...
Raavi - Shiva tum kitne ache ho...
Shiva - Boht acha hu main to... Raavi ek baat kahu?
Raavi - Bolo na...
Shiva - Raavi main kabhi tumhe divorce nahi dunga...
Raavi - Par achanak se yeh baat kaha se aayi?
Shiva - Dekh... Tune to apna confession kar liya par mujhe na abhi kuch samajh nahi a raha par I am sure ki kabhi aisi naubat nahi aayegi ki hume divorce Lena pade... Tum bhi nahi dogi na mujhe divorce?
Raavi - Kabhi nahi aur ab tum kya aise mujhse chipke hue ho? Mere pati ne dekh liya na to kacha chaba jayega... Mana ki woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta... Par mujhe leke possesive to hoga hi... Aur ab dur hat jao mujhse...
Shiva - Haan haan... Agar meri chipkali patni ne tumhe dekh liya na mujhse chipakte hue to phir to tumhe boht daategi... Kyu ki pyaar karti hai woh mujh se... Aur ab tak to jaan hi gaya hu main ki shayad mujhe kisi aur ke saath dekh le na to woh unke gaalo par chaate(slaps) ki barsaat karti hai...
Raavi (breaks the hug) - Main itni bhi buri nahi hu ki kisi ko thappad maar du...
Shiva - Kyu woh Neel ki bhasha(language) mein uss udan khatole ko nahi maara thi...
Raavi - Woh to maine iss liye maara thi kyu ki woh kabse bole jaa rahi thi... Baaki kuch nahi...
Shiva - Ab tu jaa aur kapde change kar le... Baad mein so jaana...
Raavi - Hmm... Theek hai...
Then she comes after changing her clothes and then she and Shiva both sleeps...So guys it was the part agar accha laga ho to vote and comment jaroor karna...

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