- Choose Wisely - ( Draco x Y/n )

IMPORTANT!

Hello fellow readers! It's been 2 years since I last posted in this book which is crazy! Anyways I just wanted to ask for some opinions and probably just a update. 

Due to some thinking and plot ideas, I'm thinking of fixing up Choose Wisely but making a different book as I'd like to keep this book as I love reading the funny comments and just looking back at how I started to see how I am now.  

I've been back reading and I do agree I think I could've fixed the grammar, focus on the story more and not back track or get lost as I had moments for example: Y/n (who I'm thinking of giving a name) would be the youngest in the trio but suddenly is the eldest. Or just forgetting lines or skipping scene which are important to the story to make sense. 

As those two years goes by I've pretty much can say I've improved and would like to try again redoing this book. Though the plot line will stay the same and I'd probably just spam all chapters asap so I won't get bored posting or forget hahahah. 

So here are the changes I've decided to make: 

Names: 

1. Giving Y/n a name.

2. Changing Vinny's name as I found a nicer name

3. Monica's name will be different

Plot: 

The story will stay the same, I'll put Draco in the story more as he was kinda just forgotten during Chamber of Secrets and mostly Deathly Hallows. 

Unless you all think keeping the story to focus on Y/n and the trio and just Draco will be the love interests and not the main focus. 

Y/n's Character: 

1. I've been told that people actually wanted Y/n to be mean and cold to Harry during Order and a bit of Deathly Hallows. One person explained as since Y/n has been with the Death Eaters more and more and she and Draco kinda becomes brainwashed in a way. 

2. Y/n will still try to protect her sister who I'll make more bonding scene as I do agree with some comments, Vinny and Y/n doesn't really have that sibling relationship so why would Y/n sacrifice so much for her. SO! I'll be adding more scene with those two to try and give that motivation. 

3. Y/n's childhood was kinda all over the place. One moment Sirius gets taken when she was 5 but then in the end somehow he was gone when she was a baby which is when Snape took care of her and so on. I'll make sure her past is more clear and that it Is set. 

4. I also know many people have said Y/n is pretty much a Hermione with a splash of Harry. So Y/n's characteristic will be changing a bit. I decided to make her like her dad and her mom more. 

The list: 

• She will be manipulative for both good and bad (Slytherin - Mom) 

• She will be very daring (Gryffindor - Dad) 

• She will be knowledgable (Remus as he ends up raising her so he probably made sure she'd do good in school) 

• She will be very confused and naive to love. | Since she had a messy childhood she will be unsure and confused of love both in friendship and relationship. Which is why right after have a crush on Draco she instantly throws herself at Cedric and right after Cedric she throws herself at Draco. This will show how naive and how much she is still needs to learn what she wants. Which will be the reason why those two will get together at the end of Order of the Phoenix. 

Conclusion? Find out! 

If you have any tips please tell!