Yeah, sounds like a whole load of bogus and "what the f is going?"
Well to elaborate on why this is or could be happening is because I stumbled upon the first and initial draft of the story and I was beyond impressed at the narrative, quality, and, direction the story was headed. It looked like something that had more life and felt less cold and lacking.
Claire had a sister, Martha was an older aunt watching over the two, her sister had a boyfriend, and it goes on. The story had a reasonably fleshed dynamic and didn't seem like it was forced or lacking that deeply in it's creativity. I'm not saying this release is bad (Even though it kinda is) But compared to this shell of a story filled with no exact direction and no room to actually feel impacted by the characters, I feel this rewrite (Or in gaming terms remaster) can absolutely flesh out the characters and give them much more humanity which a ton of them (IF NOT ALL) were lacking. So, hopefully either while I am writing my new title or done with it, I'll give this a go again. Because, I'm pretty sure this story has way more potential than just me trying to use it as a challenge to get a book done.
But while all that is happening, be sure to check out my new title which is Meeting The Good Boy which is I think a dark or should I say YA fiction.
And also be sure to check out Zahrah_Danzaki new titles that are gaining heat right now. You will not be disappointed.
Alright. adios.
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Criminal Detective
Misteri / Thriller"Criminal Detective" follows the story of Claire Williams, a former detective who served time in jail for her involvement in money laundering for Benson Adkins, the manager of the girl band ChickLit. Determined to turn her life around and make amend...
