LOVE
when I look in your EYESI see usTOGETHER holding handsLost in them you bindMe in a PASSION kissYou're my GIRLFRIENDyoure CUTE is capturing me Under a spellHealing me SEXY You areNo other FEMALE will doOur love fixes me
dairydecoded : 2/5
Awwthentic : 2/5
Total : 4/10
Comment : Nice attempt, but words were improperly used. Errors highlighted in bold.
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Theme: WomanTitle: She Is DaydreamShe is daydream, like cherry blossoms in spring,LOOKING at her makes me anxious.She is PRETTY, like colors of leaves in autumn,TOUCHING her makes me gracious.She is BEAUTY, like mist in the mountains,EMBRACING her makes me PASSIONATE.She is bliss, like water sprayed from fountains,Loving her make me infinite.
dairydecoded : 3/5
Awwthentic : 4/5
Total : 7/10
Comment : Beautifully expressed. Rhyme structure is good. A well-written poem
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PASSIONA pretty LADY; fair she was,A tear she shed, the cause?Two hearts in HARMONY beat,As two LOVERS finally meet.The LOVE she had borne for long and longer;Now bloomed, strong and stronger.Under the warm and AFFECTIONATE gaze of the world,A tale begins, that has ever been toldIt's funny how eternal ROMANCEBegins with a single glance.
diarydecoded : 2.8/5
Awwthentic : 3/5
Total : 5.8/10
Comment : Good choice of words. Well-written.
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UnityThey look at me in UNITYTWO PRETTY EYESTracking my every move curiouslyFollowing the starry skiesThey look at me like LOVERSTOGETHER with a lovely smileShyly hiding behind their coversPeeking every once in a whileA mystery I'll always beSo the smile won't subdueThus your curiosity is freeAnd you will always be you
diarydecoded : 3/5
Awwthentic : 4/5
Total : 7/10
Comment : Sweet, simple and deep. Nicely written.
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Love•~•~•~•Missing YouI've been waiting forever toowrapped under a coverawaiting for your arrival , my loverthis was never a hastleto build with you a sand-castleThinking about our passionate lovelike a beautiful flying dovePondered about our relationship over and over againActing cheesy , holding out my handForever togetherYour fingers brushing mine like a soft feather.
diarydecoded : 2.5/5
Awwthentic : 3/5
Total : 5.5/10
Total : Nice attempt, but it felt like an incomplete poem.
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TOGETHEROne person plus another person makes a RELATIONSHIP;It goes far deeper than friendship! The BEAUTY of two people together is amazing! An invisible string pulling two hearts TOGETHER a LOVE un-phasing.KISSING and HUGGING convey emotions of lovers,The PASSION so deep understood only by each other.
diarydecoded : 2.5/5
Awwthentic : 3.5/5
Total : 6/10
Comment : A good expression of how a relationship should be.
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Relationship A session between a FEMALE and the male Became something more than PASSIONAs they are about to make out in bed the BOYFRIEND seen them Mad as a hatterHe diss the girl not so secret LOVERThe other male left angrily without a KISSAnd now the male broke up with his GIRLFRIEND.
diarydecoded : 1.5/5
Awwthentic : 1/5
Total : 2.5/10
Comment : Did not make any sense. Half-hearted attempt.
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The Winner for Round 3 are unfortunatepoet and ChaosJune.
Congratulation to both of you.
The Fourth Round will be a competition between the winners of Round 1, 2 and 3.
Thank you to all the participants who participated till round 3. :)
Participants of Round 4 are Starryeyes7, ChaosJune and unfortunatepoet. :)
Prompt and Rules for Round 4 will be updated soon.
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