Username: MadBooks
Poem Selected: One Step More
Title chose: Keep Driving
Type: Free Verse
No. of Lines: 24
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Title: Keep Driving
After we broke up,
Oh oh, woah oh,
I started my car but hit a bump,
Oh oh, woah oh,
My cell phone went out the window,
Oh oh, woah oh.
I just gotta keep driving,
Oh oh, woah oh,
I just gotta stop lying,
Oh oh, woah oh,
Leave you on the road behind me,
Oh oh, woah oh,
Learn how to finally be free.
Oh oh, woah oh,
I finally smiled a couple miles away,
Oh oh, woah oh,
Even a small distance makes me feel okay,
Oh oh, woah oh,
The radio's turned up all the way,
Oh oh, woah oh,
And to think it's only been a day,
Oh oh, woah oh.
I just gotta keep driving,
Keep driving.
Please rate on the scale of 1 - 5 as a comment on this page.
Total Ratings.
Awwthentic: 4.5
Miss_Popular_97: 5
Lonely_Glider: 4.3
Owain Glyn: 4
Ratings from Reader's: 8
Average of Readers Ratings: 2.66
Sum Total: 16.4
Verdict: It was nearly a perfect poem and we were hoping it get good ratings but i guess our readers didn't think that way. I am happy to announce you as a runner-up though. Your poem has potential and sooner or later, it will reached to readers. :)
Thank you for participating.
Awwthentic~
Dated: 15/09/2014
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