Entry #1 - Submitted

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Username : JadeShade 

Theme : Winter & Snow

Title Selected : The Morning's Snow

No. of Lines : 13

  "The Morning's Snow"

The thickening silence echoes in my ears.

The frosted windows above my bed, Silky silver wrapped for a friend.

White glow of snow up ahead.

The sprinkles like magic,

Glittering down, in a frozen powder.

"Good morning darling" it said so gently.

As the morning rose it snowed.

The mornings snow, freezing cold.

Not one snow flake better then the rest.

I take a deep breath, inhaleing a burning cold sensation.

I step out side, my bare feet touching the icey white snow.

 

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1 - Nice Atttempt

Ratings.

Owain Glyn : 3

Lonely Rider : 3.5

Ratings : 6 = 3

Total : 9.5

 

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Date: 01/12/14

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