Username : PoeticPrincess317
Theme : Winter (Mood : BitterSweet)
Title Chosen : Winter Worries Me
No. of Lines : 24
"WINTER WORRIES ME"
Of course winter is the best time of year
But it could also be...a horror
Doctors without borders, when it comes to saving the children...
Rather than their mother
When all hard work was supposed to pay off so that we could
celebrate the fruits of our labor
Instead there are homeless, even jobless people
Stripped of happiness, now corporate traitors
Even on the holidays there are still bills to pay
A corrupted government that defies
Rather than put people ahead of profits,
Their final decisions's ridiculed by lies
And it only gets worse...so my parents say
No matter how many times you try
Nothing is possible in this world anymore
God forbid, it's worth committing suicide
And yet, here, we must face it
A Bitter-sweetened future, nonetheless
Worrying that our newborn(s) have a proper education
Before they decide to leave the nest
May I question my existence first
Before I pass this test?
And truly survive in this World Wide Web of lies
Where only G-D knows best?
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Lonely Rider : 3.5
Ratings : 3 = 1.5
Total : 8
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Awwthentic~
Date: 01/12/14
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