Entry #3 - Submitted

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Username : Maryam0614

Theme : Snow

Title Chosen : Snow

No. of Lines : 12

Snow

Snow everyone seem to like you.

You are so pure

Pure as angel

Pretty ice glass

I see kids make snowman with you

Or snow fight

You are quite beautiful

But you only me make colder

I see ice-skaters skate beautifully when you're around.

Everyone in their beautiful coats holding onto coffee.

You just make me wanna cuddle in my blanket drinking hot chocolate

And to shed some tears while watching Umrao Jaan.

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 Ratings.

Owain Glyn : 2

Lonely Rider : 1

Ratings : 3 = 1.5

Total : 4.5

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Date: 01/12/14

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