Username: TicciJade
Poem Selected: Broken Heart (Without You)
Title: The Shattered Pieces.
Type: dark
No. of Lines: 12
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Title: Broken Heart
My heart is shattered,
Shattered like glass,
It'll never heal,
I've been cut to many times,
For i am never forgiving you,
My heart is like glass,
You have broke and shattered this heart,
I'm trying to pick up the pieces of glass and trying to re piece my heart.
But alas it's taking to long,
I don't know who to trust no more,
I'm scared to think i might just suffer.
I might just suffocate and drown in your lies.
Please rate on the scale of 1 - 5 as a comment on this page.
Total Ratings.
Awwthentic: 3
Miss_Popular_97: 3
Lonely_Glider: 3
Owain Glyn: 3
Ratings from Reader's: 7
Average of Readers Ratings: 2.33
Sum Total: 14.83
Verdict: It was quite good but as I said we had other much better one's to select from. Your poem has an emotional angle and I believe it will not go un-noticed. All the Best.
Thank you for participating.
Awwthentic~
Dated: 15/09/2014
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