Username : Niivah
Theme : SnowFlakes
Title Chosen : SnowFlakes of Rememberance
No. of Lines : 24
Snowflake of remembrance
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The cuts, the edges
The bruises and scars
All laying open
And suffering the dark
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The cold, the past
The blood and the fate
This little red drop
Is to be a snowflake
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It falls down, so slow
So slow and so soft
A memory for all
Who ever have lost
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The crystals, the shape
The story and the part
Everyone is unique
Respect 'em by heart
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The colour, the ember
The spark at the centre
Feelings will arise
For 'tis a cold December
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The power of love
With the miracle of life
Let's remember together
And pass on the light!
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Owain Glyn : 3
Lonely Rider : 5
Ratings : 31 = 15.5
Total : 23.5
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Date: 01/12/14
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