Username: emmaleficentiments
Poem Selected: The Miracle Kiss
Title Chosen: Kiss Me Till Forever
Type: Rhyme
No. of Lines: 24
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Title: Kiss Me Till Forever
Kiss me now or kiss me never
I want our kiss to last forever
onto my nose, cheeks, lips or nape
let's just find our sweet escape
in our world we'll just hold hands
we are lovers in a trance
all the worries will drift away
the swirling bliss will just stay
Kiss me slow and kiss me real
your burning passion, let me feel
while we kiss I feel us fly
we're soaring through the star-filled sky
Allow me to connect with you
and make our weirdest dreams come true
Connect my lips to yours all night
we'll kiss and kiss till the morning light
It's all that magic I can't explain
and without your kiss I am in pain
Let us seal our love so strong
with our kiss and favorite song
A frog's just a frog without a kiss
and with you I took the risk
And lucky me I finally found Mr. Right
who can kiss me forever, all day, all night.
Please rate on the scale of 1 - 5 as a comment on this page.
Total Ratings.
Awwthentic: 3.5
Miss_Popular_97: 3
Lonely_Glider: 4.5
Owain Glyn: 2
Ratings from Reader's: 20
Average of Readers Ratings: 6.66
Sum Total: 17.66
Verdict: We loved it. The feeling was portrayed effectively but you have repeated few words over and over again which is not the right thing to do while writing a poetry. It ruins the feel of the poem with everything looking repetitive. Nice Composition though.
Rank: Winner of 3rd Prize
Thank you for participating.
Awwthentic~
Dated: 15/09/2014
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