Entry #15 - Second Runner-Up

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Username : GeminiGirll

Theme : Snowflakes

Title Selected : Snowflakes

No. of Lines : 24

 Snowflakes

As I stand on the ground,

Watching you walk away.

Wind nudges me and say-

Oh! Thou damsel,

Why are you standing

In distress?

Answers-

I have none.

What should I say?

He just walked away.

No notification or explanation

He gave.

Boisterous wind guffaws;

Nonplussed I feel it.

Playing with my hair,

It shows me the reason:

White pearls fall on the ground

From the arsenal of clouds.

Different are these from one another,

Same journey,

But different path.

Either collide to be one or to destroy.

We, too, are like Snowflakes, and

We collided to fall apart.

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 Ratings.

Owain Glyn : 3

Lonely Rider : 4.5

Ratings : 27 = 13.5

Total : 21

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Date: 05/12/14

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