Username: ChelseaMarie007
Poetry Selected: Darkness (Without You)
Title Selected: Lost and not Found
Type: Free Verse
No. of Lines: 18
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Title: Lost and not found
If somethings lost
then what's its worth
when things were so precious
now become your curse
it's hard to breathe
and watch it all leave
when together
becomes alone
when what was solid
becomes broken stone
It hurts to smile
even after a while
when hopes and dreams
become unseen
when love bleeds in
and holds your seems
When its done and gone
where do you belong
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Total Ratings.
Awwthentic: 4
Miss_Popular_97: 3.5
Lonely_Glider: 3
Owain Glyn: 3
Ratings from Reader's: 4
Average of Readers Ratings: 1.33
Sum Total: 14.83
Verdict: We liked it but you ran out of votes. I did said voting isn't everything but it does mean something. I hope you understand. We have good reviews for you and we all will be voting for your poem, I am sure it will be loved by the readers. Personally, I love it.
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Dated: 15/09/2014
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