Title: Empty World
Author: ilovetikky
Poem: Darkness (Without You)
Type: Free Verse
No. of Lines: 24
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Title: Darkness
empty world
empty cup
all gone cup, not filled yet cup
doesn’t matter
how you look at it
doesn’t care how
optimist, pessimist
it’s the same anyways
too much space
to sprawl out
too much space
with only me
the world’s too big
too big and too empty
no one else besides me
no one else beside me
somebody find me somebody to love
nobody to find me somebody to love
nobody anywhere
anybody nowhere
this world is too empty
empty and hollow
too quiet
too silent
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Total Ratings.
Awwthentic: 2
Miss_Popular_97: 2.5
Lonely_Glider: 3
Owain Glyn: 3
Ratings from Reader's: 9
Average of Readers Ratings: 3
Sum Total: 13.5
Verdict: I am sorry, its too repetitive and we couldn't actually figure out the emotions behind it. Maybe, you can edit it and it came out well.
Would love to read and review when you publish it.
Thank you for participating.
Awwthentic~
Dated: 15/09/2014
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