Entry # 2 - Submitted

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Username : Rosebuddy23

Theme : snowflakes

Title Chosen : snowflakes like us

No. of Lines : 12

 Snowflakes like us

I find that snow flakes are like us

So simple yet so complex.

Everyone of them are different,

as we humans are too.

Like snowflakes we can fall,

and like snowflakes we can change.

Human hearts seem so fragile,

they can break like ice.

Snowflakes are fragile too,

they can be destroyed when it get's too warm.

This is what I think of,

on a stormy winter night like this.

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 Ratings.

Owain Glyn : 3

Lonely Rider : 2

Ratings : 7 = 3.5

Total : 8.5

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Date: 01/12/14

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