Username : luv2writeandread
Poem chosen : How Free Are we?
Title Selected : Are we really free?
Type : Deep/Dark
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Her Poem.
Title: Are We Really Free?
I sit there
Thinking of what life would be
If I where free
From the comments
And the pain
Skipping doesn't help
Moving does nothing
Fear follows
And never leaves you
I'm out of options
So I jump the only price
My life.
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Total Ratings.
Awwthentic: 3
Miss_Popular_97: 4
Lonely_Glider: 2.5
Owain Glyn: 3
Ratings from Reader's: 11
Average of Readers Ratings: 3.6
Sum Total: 16.16
Verdict: A failry good attempt so I had to take you up as a runner up. Though, I suggest you edit and make necesarry changes. Maybe add a few lines more. Completely upto you. :)
Thank you for participating.
Awwthentic~
Dated: 15/09/2014
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