Entry #16 - Submitted

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Username : Fan_Boy_00

Theme : Snow

Title Selected : Last Winter, Last Touch

No. of Lines : 16 

Last Winter, Last Touch

 

 Every ounce of snow falling from the sky

Like heaven falling down and coming to our sight

The touch of every cold breeze and every falling flake

Making me shiver and keeping me frozen with a cruel ache

Where the willow froze with the water, I will cry my tears for you

Avenging your death even when my skin turns heavenly blue

And when I turn to your side of life, it will feel like fire

Warm and hurting, me burning of desire

Because my love for you is an endless road

That I shall walk across

That will bring me to you, my one and only true love

Even though the wind is so harsh and cuts through my skin

I am devoted to you my only and everlasting sin

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 Ratings.

Owain Glyn : 2

Lonely Rider : 3

Ratings : 22 = 11

Total : 16

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Date: 06/12/14

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