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Judge #4 Scores and Feedback

Let's take a look kung ano ang resulta and feedback from JUDGE #4.

Challenger #1: The Ghost's Angel
Content - 40%
Creativity - 25%
Cleanliness - 20%
Total - 85%

FEEDBACK:
The story is free from obvious errors at hindi rin iyon ganoon kagulo. The author make it creative for using korean phrases and sentences. The opening scene is rather unique and cute, however, the flow of the story is quite predictable and cliche. Overall, I enjoyed the story and it clearly shows the topic "second chance".

Challenger #2: Dear Mirani
Content - 30%
Creativity - 20%
Cleanliness - 20%
Total - 70%

FEEDBACK:
It was well written  and it was just amazing that the author chose to write the story in english. The plot is unique and unpredictable. However, the story should be all about second chance but hindi ko masyadong makita yon.

Challenger #3: The Next Time
Content - 30%
Creativity - 25%
Cleanliness - 15%
Total - 70%

FEEDBACK:
The story has a cliche romance story plot. It's also confusing dahil akala ko sa ay kanila ng parents niya iikot ang story. That made me confused on the connections of every scene. I can't also see the second chance in the story.

Challenger #4: Behind The Bars
Content - 30%
Creativity - 25%
Cleanliness - 20%
Total - 75%

FEEDBACK:
The story was really well written and I like the sequence of events. The story isn't really about second chance because they didn't gave the protagonist a second chance. It was first chance, or rather correcting the false allegations.

Challenger #5:Twisted
Content - 40%
Creativity - 35%
Cleanliness - 15%
Total - 90%

FEEDBACK:
The story is very unique however, it's confusing. Yes it is about chances but I feel like I have to read between the lines and fill in all the gaps. Parang ang daming kulang at ang daming tanong na hindi masagot.

Challenger #6: Take Two
Content - 40%
Creativity - 30%
Cleanliness - 20%
Total - 90%

FEEDBACK:
Nangangamoy agad ang second chance sa unang scene palang and at the end they had a happy ending. It was well written and clean. I enjoyed it kahit na medyo predictable ang mga scenes.

Challenger #7: Tangents
Content - 40%
Creativity - 25%
Cleanliness - 20%
Total - 85%

FEEDBACK:
The story is rather common in this generation and it really happens. I love the story, however, there are so many cliche scenes, in which I believe that we can't really avoid. The story is rather about second chance which isn't given at the end and isn't it supposed to be a glimpse of better and happier future?

Challenger #8: This Time
Content - 40%
Creativity - 10%
Cleanliness - 20%
Total - 70%

FEEDBACK:
The story has a common plot. It has the same plot as the other stories about wife and husbands, then eventually magkakabalikan. Yes it is about second chance pero masyadong alam na ng readers ang mga susunod.

Challenger #9: Exchange Gift
Content - 30%
Creativity - 20%
Cleanliness - 15%
Total - 65%

FEEDBACK:
Weird as it may seem but I enjoy reading stories about incest like cousins pero hindi talaga magkadugo. Syempre, ayoko noon sa totong buhay. I enjoyed the story but it raise so many questions and it's a little bit confusing. Hindi ko rin mahanap kung nasaan ang second chance sa story. And it's alright if they're not blood related but they really are.