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Judge#3 Scores and Feedback

Here's the scores and feedback from JUDGE #3

Challenger #1: My Yellow Flavour
Creativity (25)
Content (30)
Cleanliness (10)
Total (65)

  - May kilig factor but it doesn't have any serious conflict that could give the story more spice. Masyadong bias sa main lead ang story that both characters doesn't have flaws that put a li'l defects on their personality. The whole story are too good to be true. To be even believe that it exist in real life. The writer has skills though but need further improvements.

Challenger #2: Kalidasa
Creativity (25)
Content (35)
Cleanliness (20)
Total (80)

  - I like how the story goes. Well written and very pumapag-ibig. Ang tanong ko lang, lahat ba nang character sa story are famous fictional character somewhere? 'Cause it's too confusing having too many names for a one shot. Other than that, I like it. Good job.

Challenger #3: FLR on Valentines Day
Creativity (25)
Content (45)
Cleanliness (15)
Total (85)

  - It's confusing 'cause some parts became a first person's POV though it is first written as third person. Maybe the writer should also improve on using symbols especially the qoutation mark ("). May mga times kasi na dapat apostrophe (') ang gagamitin kapag may gustong i-qoute sa loob nang statement para hindi maconfuse ang mambabasa. As a whole, it's a nice story with lesson to learn. May laman, may hugot. Well done.

Challenger #4: The Legend of Cupid's Arrow
Creativity (30)
Content (40)
Cleanliness (15)
Total (85)

  - So far ito 'yung paborito ko. Pasok siya sa taste ko smh. Siguro kailangan lang magreread ang writer sa ginawa niya para madouble check ang mga spelling. Saka sana ehh 'yung way of talking nang mga characters ay iba-iba para magkaroon sila nang identity. But it's a great story. Keep it up.

Challenger #5: Usapang Lasing
Creativity (15)
Content (30)
Cleanliness (10)
Total (55)

  - It's more on saying than showing kaya wala masyadong emotional attachment sa mga readers. Masyado ring mabilis ang pagkukwento na minsan parang ang gulo. Although maganda sana ang story hindi lang nabigyan nang justice. Need more improvement. Just keep on writing.

Challenger #6: My Only MVP
Creativity (25)
Content (25)
Cleanliness (15)
Total (65)

  - Writer has potential but needs to learn more on writing a story. I like the flow of the story but the starter is too plain. If only you could make the first few sentence catchy I'll find it entertaining. Wala ring masyadong thrill when you continue to read it. Kahit maganda pa ang ending kung ang first half of the story are too plain it won't work. Try to reread your work to know what and where to improve.