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Judge #1 Scores & Feedback

We're really sorry for the long wait.   Here's the scores and feedback from JUDGE #1

Challenger #1: My Yellow Flavour
Content - 20%
Creativity - 12%
Cleanliness - 10%
Total - 42%

Feedback:
The writer is more focused on narrating  based on emotional aspect rather than situational. It has it's useful aspect in narration. However,  too much of it can leave readers at lost plotwise. Nontheless,  the writer was able to keep the story flowing. Good job!

Challenger #2: Kalidasa
Content - 30%
Creativity - 20%
Cleanliness - 13%
Total - 63%

Feedback:
I have to give credit to the writer. I'm not knowledgeable on the stance where to properly use English and Tagalog, but I felt there should be consistency - if you prefer to use Taglish in narrating or in dialogue. But I'm no expert,  it's just a personal opinion. However,  the writer has an exceptional tone and good flow of plot. Nicely done!

Challenger #3: FLR on Valentines Day
Content - 30%
Creativity - 22%
Cleanliness - 16%
Total - 68%

Feedback:
I had commented on other writers about proper usage of English and Tagalog in terms of narration and dialogue, and this here, the writer had actually given me something I expected. Not only that, the writer has an exceptional tone. The flow of the plot was superb. It doesn't lead the reader astray. Good job!

Challenger #4: The Legend of Cupid's Arrow
Content - 30%
Creativity - 23%
Cleanliness - 16%
Total - 69%

Feedback:
This was a great retelling of one of the known mythology. The writer was very witty and the tone and flow was refreshing. I commend the writer for the idea and her writing style. Great job!

Challenger #5: Usapang Lasing
Content - 25%
Creativity - 21%
Cleanliness - 12%
Total - 58%

Feedback:
The writer delivered her own tone from an ordinary plot. It was an interesting read. However,  the narration was a bit cluttered and loose, but the plot flowed well. It was a good character driven plot. Good job!

Challenger #6: My Only MVP
Content - 20%
Creativity - 15%
Cleanliness - 10%
Total - 45%

Feedback:
The over-all plot was great, however the transition fell short of me and a bit rushed. However,  the writer was able to life on the story by her own writing style. Good job!