Son - A Haiku

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by Alexander Hamilton

Pleasurable dawn
An oldest, pleasing son plays
into the tissue

Auto Praise for Son - A Haiku

"The juxtaposition of son and tissue is truly inspired."- The Daily Tale

"I don't like short poems. So why am I reviewing a haiku, you may wonder? Well, I liked the title - 'Son'. It went down hill from there."- Enid Kibbler

"Amazing how so few words can set a scene so perfectly. I close my eyes and all I can see is the pleasurable dawn."- Hit the Spoof

"I felt that I was a son. It was spooky. I hope to read more by Alexander Hamilton. Perhaps next time, something longer."- Zob Gloop

"I've always wanted to write a haiku about a son. I can't belive Alexander Hamilton has beaten me to it."- Betty Borison

"Pleasurable dawn is a popular first line for a haiku. It's incredible how much diversity can be achieved with those final lines."- Chris Critic, otherwise known as Cristic

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