I haven't read the full story and therefore can not say whether it fits perfectly or not but so far, it does.
3. Cover 6/10.
Sort of an average cover, but you could have made the writing a bit.. criminal-themed. Kind of like...the words are covered in blood, etc.
4. Description 3/5.
The word love is recited so many times. You could replace it with words like "affection", "lust", " devotion", etc.
5. First impressions 4/5.
Other than the description filled with a few errors, the first impression was pretty good. Long chapters, which are loved by many, romance, action.
LANGUAGE SKILLS 30
1. Grammar 6/10.
I can see a lot of grammatical errors including some in the description itself. It could be because of the long chapters, however, please go through it as I love am currently in love with this story but the errors don't make a good impression.
2. Vocabulary 6/10.
The only problem was that you kept using the same phrases. For example, as I mentioned earlier, you kept telling the word "love".
3. Spellings 7/10.
Most of your spellings are correct other than informal words. Not much to comment on that.
WRITTEN CONTEXT 30
1. Plot 7/10.
No offense but it's similar to any other fanfic on Wattpad.
2. Flow 7/10.
The story's got a pretty nice flow I guess. Not much to speak on that too.
3. Character development 7/10.
The fanfic only has 5 chapters so I can't let out anything yet.
OVERALL OF THE BOOK IS 5/10.
The summed-up review: It's an average book. Nothing really special about it. Same as the other books. Same characters, same " falling in love", etc. It's nice. That's all.
TOTAL- 65/100.
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