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"𝙼𝚎𝚕𝚊𝚗𝚌𝚑𝚘𝚕𝚢 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚘𝚞𝚗𝚍𝚜 𝚘𝚗 𝚊 𝚠𝚒𝚗𝚝𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚗𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝."
Title : CLOUD8IGHT
Author: Spinel243
Reviewer QueeofHell
Review :
Presentation- 18/30
1. Appearance- 3/5
The book is interesting but the appearance doesn't intrigue a reader.
2. Title- 3/5
The title is written creatively. However it doesn't appear unique to the reader.
3. Cover- 6.5/10
The cover needs vast improvements. The cover does not describe the story either.
4. Description- 2/5
The description sounds to cliche. You can improve by adding some dialogues from the middle of the story or make it more descriptive about the story and it's characters.
5. First impressions- 3.5/5
The story is interesting however the cover and description is not. They don't catch the eye of a reader.
Language Skills - 28/30
1. Grammar- 9/10
Except for a few mistakes here and there, there is no mistakes. You needn't do anything in this field.
2. Vocabulary- 9/10
The vocabulary uses common words instead of extremely technical words. This is good as the reader can understand the context easily and not misunderstand it.
3. Spellings- 10/10
There are absolutely no spelling mistakes.
~Written Context: 23.5/30
1. Plot- 9.5/10
The plot is creative and unique. I have not read a plot like this before. However, what was happening is partially predictable.
2. Flow- 10/10
The flow is excellent. The work has been written elegantly.
3. Character Development- 4/10
There is not much I can say about this as there is not much change
~Overall Appeal of the book- 7.5/10
>Total- 77/100
Review: At first glance the book is unattractive and doesn't catch the reader's eye. Unless went ahead and read the reader will not be interested. The plot, writing style is great but a makeover is needed for the first things like cover and description
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