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"𝙻𝚒𝚎 𝚜𝚝𝚒𝚕𝚕, 𝚕𝚒𝚎 𝚜𝚝𝚒𝚕𝚕, 𝚖𝚢 𝚋𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚑𝚎𝚊𝚛𝚝;
𝙼𝚢 𝚜𝚒𝚕𝚎𝚗𝚝 𝚑𝚎𝚊𝚛𝚝, 𝚕𝚒𝚎 𝚜𝚝𝚒𝚕𝚕 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚋𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚔:𝙻𝚒𝚏𝚎, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚠𝚘𝚛𝚕𝚍, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚒𝚗𝚎 𝚘𝚠𝚗 𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚏, 𝚊𝚛𝚎 𝚌𝚑𝚊𝚗𝚐𝚎𝚍

𝙵𝚘𝚛 𝚊 𝚍𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖'𝚜 𝚜𝚊𝚔𝚎."

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Title : GEMICIDE: Amid the Blues of BcHaven

Author: LPKnits

Reviewer: agusismyname

Review 

PRESENTATION- 19/30.

1. Appearance- 3/5.

Pretty respectable percentage of reads. Plus, it's productive.

2. Title- 4/5.

I've never heard this as a book title before. Like I said earlier, quite creative, unlike other Wattpad stories.

3. Cover- 6/10.

It's self-made which makes it more unique. The fonts, I'm not sure they're the right path to go. I think that "Gemicide" shouldn't be white, pink, white. It might look better as pink, white and pink.

4. Description- 3/5.

Not a single oversight. It's still wordy though.

5. First impressions- 3/5.

Pretty decent. Not much to comment on.

LANGUAGE SKILLS- 20/30.

1. Grammar- 7/10.

Just minor grammatical errors.

2. Vocabulary- 6/10.

I could see basic words. I also saw the same words being duplicated.

3. Spellings- 7/10.

A few blunders here and there. I'd be amazed if there weren't any spelling mistakes.

WRITTEN CONTEXT- 22/30.

1. Plot- 7/10.

It's an intriguing plot. I've never read any book with the same plot as this.

2. Flow- 8/10.

Not much to comment on.

3. Character development- 7/10.

Once again, I don't have any comments.

OVERALL OF THE BOOK- 6/10.

A final review in short to summarise everything: I couldn't see many errors. Nevertheless, you might need to proofread it. There are a few which shouldn't be disregarded.

TOTAL- 67/100.

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