Hi,
I've been receiving critiques about this story especially through my dms. A lot of you were not satisfied with the ending since Kiana gave Roux another chance despite of what happened. Kiana didn't chose herself, she hasn't even heal from what happened to her. She didn't deserved everything.
Writing the ending of this story was really hard for me. I had a lot of drafts containing more scenarios how I wanted Kiana to choose herself, but I ended up choosing the drafts where she didn't think about herself.
This story means so much to me since Kiana and I are the same. I made this story based on my own life and how my past relationship went. It was really toxic but I always ( we alway) end up running back to each other's arm. Some of the scenes are true even the lines. (Of course, the best thing is that we didn't had out Bentley or else it would be really hard, lol)
Just like Kiana, I ended up coming back to that toxic relationship event tho I have good other choices. I kept coming back to that same toxic person because he was home, he was the only person who believed in me back then and he was the there for me when I was at my lowest. It was hard for me to accept how everything change so fast. My ex cheated multiple times but I chose to forgive him, because I was scared that I won't find anyone who would understand me the way he did.
I didn't planned to be in love with him or with someone else just like Kiana. But he was persistent to have me, and when he did, tables turned. I don't want to put more details about my past relationship since I don't want to get any negative comments.
Long story short, I manage to get out of that toxic relationship and that cycle where he cheats, I forgive him, we get back together and goes back to cheating.
Give me time to edit this story, since I'm ready to change most of the scenes . Thank you for all of your concerns and opinions about this. Also, I'm about to publish the story of Bentley, Benz and Kaia. Hope you would support it too.
THANK U SO MUCH!!!
BINABASA MO ANG
Sold To Be His Slave [COMPLETE]
RomanceMrs. Sabine Yoshida got her eyes on the ballerina, Kiana Valeros for her son to marry. She bought her for her son to play with. Now, Kiana has to face the reality that she's the property of THE Roux Gabriel H. Yoshida.