Hey everyone,
I hate to add too many authors notes in but I wanted to check in with you all and see how you are feeling about our little DNW fanfic here.
This is the first story I've written in years and I'm still learning, so that being said - I've wondered if there's anything I can do to improve?
I know, I know, in my last authors note everyone said for me to take my time and not stress as it is my story and I should do what I want and of course I agree but at the same time I do stress and care about delivering a story my readers will enjoy.
So,
Are we liking our connections in the story?
I do have a story line, and intend to follow it without straying too far, but I've tried to add in more lighthearted scenes and dialogue to break up a bit of the drama/main story but I'm not too sure if it's taking too long for us to get to the good stuff... thoughts?
Do we need more romance? More angst/drama? More lighthearted fun between friends? More adventure? 🤔
How are we feeling about the writing style? Is it a bit easier to read since I've changed my style up a bit and broken up the paragraphs?
(I know I still need to go back and fix/edit older chapters... and I will get to it... soon!)
Anyways, I'd love to hear from you guys. This is a place where we can interact and share our thoughts.
So if anyone is interested please feel free to share what you think! It's very much appreciated!
Also side note ~ a new chapter will also be up tomorrow for those who are waiting.
I appreciate every single one of you 🥰
Thank you!✨
~ Blackrose 🤍🥀
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Dark New World || Sebastian Sallow
FanfictionSebastian Sallow and Lena Blackrose return to Hogwarts after a long year of absence, hoping for a fresh start as young adults only trying to finish up their school years. But nothing will prepare them for what's to come, with even darker twists and...
