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At Mandir,

Kartik: (crying) plz Maa, and bend his head on entrence and fainted while lion is inside as Temple is very big...

Lion roared and came towards kartik...

In kartik dreams Maa durga came...

Durga Ma: kartik beta...

Kartik: aap kon hai,

Maa: beta tumne mujhe nahi pehchana mein tumari Maa sab ki Maa,

Kartik: durga Ma aap, aap mere samne Ma, sorry Ma mujhe maaf kar do, mein bahut bura hu,

Maa: nahi beta tum bure nahi ho tum jaisa bhi ho apne halato ke karan ho,

Kartik: aapne mujhe maaf kar diya Maa, aap mujhse naraz nahi hai,

Maa: Maa apne bacche se kabhi naraz nahi ho sakti beta,

Kartik: Ma meri jaan, use kuch..

Maa: use kuch nahi hoga beta tumne kathin parisha pass kar li hai, aaj tumhare pyaar ki jeet hui hai usne tumhe aur tumne use bacchaya hai, mein tum dono ki bhakti se prasan hui,

Kartik: thank you Maa,

Maa: beta mere charnon( legs) me jo jal rakha hai jake Naira ko pila do woh thik ho jayegi, yaad rahe tumhare pass waqt bahut kaam hai, jaise jaise tum aage badoge, yeh jal katam hota jayega, isliye tumhe der nahi karni hai jao beta...

Kartik: par Maa woh sher..

Maa: woh tumhe kuch nahi kahega woh bhi tumhare pyaar ki takat ko jaan gaya hai, aur tumhare pair( legs) jaise jaise Tum aage badoge woh thik hote jayege tum bhi thoda sa jal pee lena beta, aur rahi baat angaroo ki toh jaise hi tum jal leke jaoge us par ek boond (drop) daal dena,woh gayab ho jayege...

Kartik: thik hai Maa,

Durga Maa: ek aur baat Naira ke thik hote hi tume is mandir me Jagarta karwana hoga aur mere sabhi bakhto ko sath me leke aana hoga..

Kartik: thik hai Maa mein esa hi karuga and bend his head..

Durga Maa disappears...

Kartik: Maa.... and open his eyes..

At hospital,

Toofan reached and dr took his blood and started the work,

At mandir,

Kartik stand up with great difficulty, and slowly slowly went inside the Mandir..

Lion roared..

Kartik continue his walk, lion look at kartik and he fold his hands and bend his head,

Lion became silent and sit at corner...

Kartik again started walking, and reached inside, there is small jal kund( pond) kartik look at Maa and bend his head, on his head kumkum placed, kartik then look at jal and then look here and there, just then he see a bowl he took the bowl and started watering...

At hospital,

Dr took relief, jo unhone socha tha waise hi hua, Naira is now out of danger..

Dr Mehra came out: abhi Mam thik hai par abhi bhi khatra tala nahi hai, kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

All started praying...

At mandir,

Kartik hold the bowl and once again bend his hand and came out and drink the jal, and started walking as Maa said his feet get well slowly...

Kartik then reached towards lion and bend his head and then came out and turn and throw jal on fire bolls and it's disappeared, kartik starts moving fast because jal started decreasing,

Rohan see towards kartik, and smile...

Kartik: Rohan jaldi car started karo..

Rohan nodded and ran, kartik also moving fast,

Both reached at car...

At hospital,

Naira health again become Detroit...
She started breathing heavily...

Dr shocked, again this thing happened,
Nurse give me injection and put in bottle,
But no use Naira take last breath...

Kartik and rohan reached know only 3 drops of jal is left..

Kartik ran inside fast...

Dr came and kartik reached...

I am sorry, she is no more...

Kartik shocked and shouted...

Jaan..

( Today we have completed 50 chapters of this story, thank you to all the lovely readers, this would not have been possible without your support, thank you very much for loving the story so much, keep reading and commenting, 🙏🙏🥰🥰😍😍)

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