Hello, guys! Ako ulit. I saved this draft pala. So, I am here to tell some facts about Unsolved Mystery. Marami kasing information ang 'di nasama sa mga scenes dito.
First, kung mapapansin niyo, may mga errors dito. Maraming typos and may mga ilang gramatical errors at sa names na nagkakabaliktaran. Madalas talaga sabaw ako.
May part dito no'ng nasa gym sina Chloe. Originally, Jian is a member of dance club and hindi sa music club. Nalito lang ako, sorry. It's Jamiel. (edited na)
Most of the characters are based on real people, my friends. Kinuha ko 'yung initials ng names ng mga kaibigan ko, maging ang konting details sa kanila like pag-uugali. Almost all of 'em are based on real people except Chloe, Kuya Denver, Ate Mae, Samuel and Ma'am Gail. The rest, may pinag-basehan na 'ko.
Dapat may scene kasi 'to, e. At the beginning of the story, Lueese and Jeric wasn't declared, shala declared, as an official couple. Mayroong plot twist na makikita niyo sa Nilacabb Series 3.
'Yung proposal ni Jeric, ang cringe HAHAHAHA. Originally, walang proposal 'yon or kung meron man, sa restaurant dapat. Hindi talaga dapat 'yon kasali, kaso mamamatay lang din naman silang dalawa kaya ayon.
Wala pong 18+ diyan, hindi ako gano'n. I dislike how some people that only read stories because of that and not the plot. Plus, I am a minor.
Dapat magkakaroon ng flashback 'yan sa Chapter 33, 'yung POV ni Kuya Denver pero instead, explanation na lang. Ang dami pa lang victim, ngayon ko lang na-realize. I should've put how Aya was killed and so all the victim does.
About sa friendship nila Lueese at Jamiel. Lueese, Shane, Hazel, Mikayla and Jamiel are friends since Grade 7. Si Chloe is Jamiel's childhood friend and ito rin dapat kasama, Jamiel transferred school when he was in 9th grade.
Aria and Ate Mae are cousins. So basically, Aria is Jian's Tita and Prosecutrix is Ate Mae's Tita rin.
Thank you naman sa 'yo, Jan Haziel Erodias sa pagsabi na may mga errors pala. I love you. (P.S. The character Hazel is based from Haziel).
Gusto niyo ba special chapter?
Bonus: 'Yung scene na lasing si Hazel. 'Yung mga sinabi niya ro'n na 'cugtong' and so on, ay sinabi rin ni Haziel in real life.
Sorry guys for the error. I'm working for my new story better. Thank you for the support and for reading Unsolved Mystery. As a new author, it meant a lot to me.
Love,
Trish
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Unsolved Mystery (Nilacabb Series #1)
Mystery / ThrillerAt University of Makiling, a quiet school quickly turns into a living nightmare. One by one, students are found brutally murdered, with no obvious connection between the victims. The unsettling part? The killer is someone close to them - a friend, a...
