The Things I Leave Unsaid

5. My Friend's Love Life

Leave and I will probably wait

Maybe we're just testing fate.

Holding onto a shaky past,

We try so hard to make it last,

All the while knowing that

In the end we'll probably fail

And start all over again.

I was just thinking about a friend of mine for this one. It's not great and Ill probably delete it or totally change it later but for now I'll just leave it here, collecting dust.

I know I don't really get to deep or use metaphors and my words don't really have any deeper meaning, but I have to be in a certain mood to write like that. I am usually in fairly light mood so it's harder to write all deep and artistic. I have some poems like that but I won't publish them unless I get in one of those deeper, darker moods. Sorry if that disappoints you. I love feedback. It helps me to become a better writer. So COMMENT. :)

Sincerely,
Dustin the Great