13~ Broken

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Hours later... Manik wakes up realizing he has slept off near nandini's bed, still holding her hand. He kisses nandini on her forehead seeing her still asleep. He checks his phone and sees 50missed calls from mukti, 45 from alia and 80 from cabir. He calls cabir back.
C- manik! Kaha hai tu?! Hum yahan tujhe kitni der se call karne ki koshish kar rahe the!
M- i know sorry..
C- where the hell are you?
M- uh.. hospital mein
He says looking at nandini
C- hospital?! Kya hua tujhe?
Mukti hears this and screams in the background "what happened to him?! "
C- manik tu theek hai na?
M- haan i'm fine.. woh nandini
C- kya kiya tune uske saath?!
M- cabir she got unconsious... mein use hospital leke aya... i don't know what's happening.
C- tu ruk...pehle bata tu kis hospital mein hai hum wahan aa rahe hai..
M- no don't... the last thing i wanna do right now is face mukti and alia..
C- fine but keep me posted... i hope's fine.
M- i will chal bye..
C- take care..

Just as Manik cuts the call, the doctor walks in.
Doc- mr malhotra good you're awake i wanted to talk to you about nandini's test results, shall we head to my cabir?
M- what's wrong doctor? Is everything okay? Nandini woh theek hai na?
Manik follows the doctor to his cabin.
Doc- take a seat mr. Malhotra.
M- doctor i'm not here to sit or have a hat with you! Mujhe nandini ke bare mein jana hai...so can you cut the crap?!
Manik says impatiently worried.
Doc- mr. Malhotra humne patient ke blood tests liye the.... to reconfirm the cause of the nose bleed and we've found the reason....
Manik looks at him worried and curiously.
Doc- mr. Malhotra how are you related to her?
M- how does it matter?! Can you just tell me kya hua hai meri nandini ko?!
Manik yells.
Doc- see i'm sorry mr. Malhotra but nandini ko brain tumor hai...
Manik looks at the doctor in shock.
Doc- she has crossed the early stages without many symptoms... but ab se treatment shuru karna padega because we're already late. Growth had se bad gaya hai. We need to take an action as soon as possible.... that's why i wanted to inform her family members...
Manik almost collapses to the ground hearing him. The doctor tries to help him but he jerks his hand away and walks out without saying anything... he walks around the hospital corridors lost thinking about all the moments he spent with Nandini.

(Judaai plays in the background)

Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai

Manik walks around the corridors aimlessly in a bad shape.

Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..

He recalls his first meet with nandini in manglore where she thought he was drowning. He keeps walking with teary eyes.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

He leans against the wall and stares into thin air lost... passersby could tell he was heartbroken.

Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..

He sees a couple happily hugging across the corridor and remembers his hugs with nandini... how she always boosted him up.

Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan.

He recalls his kiss with nandini and her reent love confession, her cute talks and movements.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

He cries badly falling to the ground. Hit hits the floor with his already bleeding hand madly.

Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Lakeeran vich likh di judaai

Manik cries nonstop.

Precap: Manik finds out the truth about Nandini and his past connection with her!

Guys i've finished writing the next chapter too! But i'll wait for your response and votes before i post it! Hope you guys like today's two chapters! I didn't want it to be too cliched but oh well! A big Thanks to all those giving feedback and voting! Love youu! 😘

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