Ooh, the first review! This is by BasmalahHanafi (awesome name by the way) she's super sweet, go check out her other work too!
Name:Hannah Fang Hannah's a nice name, good to see something not over the top. A last name like Fang is kind of unrealistic for the Creepypasta fandom though, but her first name is good! I suggest tweaking her last name at least a bit though.
cp name:Silent moon There's no explanation for this in the backstory or anywhere else. Why is she called this? What is her relevance to this name? It doesn't make a ton of sense and it's not very intimidating even if it might sound cool.
Catchphrase:Be silent child Ok, I'm not a huge fan of catchphrases but this is ok I guess, why does she say that though? Explanation would be very much appreciated, but it's an ok catchphrase.
Proxy:Nope Good! You don't have to be a proxy to be a killer.
Age:13 Ouch, it takes a lot to make a 13 year old into a killer so this age isn't very liked, but it might be ok I guess.
Gender:Female Alright.
Sexuality:Asexual YESSS REPRESENT! Besides, a killer realistically wouldn't have sexual attraction. It'd be nice to at her romantics though. Is she aromantic? Heteroromantic? Otherwise, this is really good!
Species:Posseded You told you you meant possessed if I remember right, this is alright. Some OCs possess people, but few are actually possessed themselves. That's pretty cool, but please explain why and how she became possessed, it'll help her develop much better.
Personality:Very aggressive annoying This definitely needs expansion. People who kill others are likely to have these traits anyways so there's not much of a point in putting it in her personality. Even if she's a killer, she should have a bit more personality than the obvious character traits. Is she an overthinker? Does she have lazy tenancies? Add to this a lot.
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I'm not a pro artist but I do draw, so I will say a bit on the art. The clothes are quite unfitting for someone who kills others. You also could've been much neater with the colouring and taken more of your time on this. It looks rushed and messy which I completely understand, you may have been in a rush, plus not everyone is a super amazing pro. you could've been neater and more clear on the drawing though, it's difficult to interpret at more than just a random person. Judging by your drawing of Hannah, she has orange and/or brown hair, gold eyes, bare feet, peachy skin, a purple t-shirt, and pink shorts. I could be wrong, but that's what I see by the picture. She really should cover more skin and have more rational clothing for someone in the Creepypasta fandom. Plus, her clothes shouldn't be bright colours, they should be darker. It'd be a good idea to give her longer pants and cover her arms, or give her some kind of jacket or sweater. Cover her skin more and give her shoes if she doesn't have them already!
