This a super freaking beautiful and well drawn OC was made by Elezabolt so go check out her other works!
NAME: Misty Stenfield Nothing wrong here, very nice name! I may or may not have read this as Steinfeld though 😅
CP NAME: Madhattress(because she is crazy when it comes to her loved ones) The explanation for the name sounds a bit overused, and the Mad Hatter wasn't known for this, so it isn't super accurate, but it sounds ok. This can still work pretty well.
AGE: 16 The prime age. Remember, it takes a lot to get someone to start killing so be extremely cautious of this cliche age.
GENDER: Female Good, nothing wrong here.
SPECIES: Human Alright, good!
PERSONALITY: Chirpy yet dangerous Definitely needs expansion, I don't really get anything from this. Judging by her CP name motivation, I can only assume the rest of her personality but it'd be very much appreciated to actually explain it. Please expand this a lot more, these two words do not mean any true personality.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
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You headlined the chapter with this image so I am 99.9% sure this is her. First of all, I love this design. It's super eccentric and wild. Though, a terrible clothing choice Creepypasta. I'm going to try not to list such long physical descriptions too often, but it appears that Misty is wearing: A blue and pink dress (?) with burgundy accents, a red and blue hat tied into her head with a grey headband, a ruffled piece of fabric, and a very thin, mostly blue necklace holding the dress up (accompanied by very loose transparent sleeves) that is attached to a small red and blue buckled on bow. There also seems to be a small red watch/clock on her necklace. Misty's clothes here are far from fitting or appropriate for Creepypasta, especially if she is 16 and a swift runner and a freaking blade wielder (stated below). Please, PLEASE cover her up more and give her fitting clothes. This isn't a prom, sorry. For her looks, she appears to have: Shoulder length pink hair and red-ish-magenta, light blue and dark blue highlights and tips in her hair. Her right eye is pink with a heart shaped pupil and her left eye is blue with a diamond shaped pupil, along with a blue diamond painted over her right eye and several red jewel shaped details on her left cheek. Her skin is a very pale and even in colour, she has pink earrings, and there also seems to be fangs? Now, while this design is super unique and beautiful, it isn't Creepypasta worthy. I see an anime girl who should be in a circus, not intimidating whatsoever. Make her more scary rather than cute and cover her up a lot more. Add physical flaws, as she seems to have none. And what's with the heterochromia? I get that it's cool looking and all but it's so rare, and for Creepypasta OCs it's just super common. I really hope she's wearing coloured contacts, and if she is please explain why she needs to look so wild. Pink eyes aren't real, unless you count Pink Eye...*shudders* For real life people who have heterochromia, it's usually just two different shades of the same eye colour or different common eye colours. Also, how come her pupils are odd? She should blend it, not stand out. Also her hair hopefully is dyed, these are really unnatural hair and eye colours. I highly recommend you change up most of the look, as amazing at it is. While this is an awesome design and it's also very well drawn, it's not Creepypasta worthy.
