Is the Land of Dawn the ultimate destination? Or are the nonpareil adventures, unexpected relationships, discords fixed-- are the pieces that will make each heroes' lives an ultimate destination in themselves?
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Hello to all the readers of this fan-fiction. To those who have been really following this story, I have created a one-shot contest last month to parade the works of those who wanted to write for my story, the Land of Dawn. Since I was having trouble choosing from the one-shot submissions, I will post the link/story of every entry here and comment something about it, also, for others to read and enjoy. You guys can also decide/vote for your choice, they will also be acknowledged.
Even so, the winners will be revealed on the last part of this update.
Here are the entries:
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Link to the story: https://www.wattpad.com/501354041-~mobile-legends-oneshots-and-dares-~-~from-our
My comment: I really love this entry. Its very sequential and I can really follow on the story's flow. The scenes are utterly adorable since its based on HayaGura (who doesn't love them, right?). I love the characters' attitudes, how they conversed towards each other. The plot is really cute and sort of relatable at some points. Overall, this story is a must read since you can really feel the sincerity of the writer through the conversations of the characters and how she placed them on each scene. Thank you for your entry! <3
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Story: A loud bang happened when Zilong pushed the boy in front of him. He didn't know why he was doing this. He didn't understand why he was like this.
He was brought out of his thoughts when he saw a young lady yelling in front of him. She was scolding him but he didn't mind. Her long white hair was placed in a high ponytail, a large blue flower standing out. She had a gold headband on her head, her bangs covering her left eye.He let out a laugh realizing it was Miya, a childhood, surprising the younger girl.
"What's so funny?" Asked the girl, confused."It's adorable when you scold me," he whispered in her ears. Her face turned into a bright red and muttered a small thank you. He looked down at the male who later on the floor after being pushed into the locker. He felt a pang of regret before helping the boy up. Upon realized it, she quickly scrambled to help the boy, "Omg, Estes are you okay? I'm sorry I forgot about you!" She fractionally asked him.
