Reviews from my co-author and readers. Nakakagana lang magsulat pag may reviews kaya nilagay ko dito. You can skip this note naman if you don't want to read.
Bl4ckRoseWP
Maganda yung story. As in, noong sinimulan ko, I just can't stop reading. I like how you incorporated romance in the story without making the readers cringe. Like kapag may nakakakilig na scene, nakakakilig talaga. Hindi sya yung awkward, kasi alam mo na mystery yung story? The cases na sinosolve nila yung mga crimes sa loob ng story is interesting and captivating.
@NoviceUser
Halata naman po na magaling kayo gumawa ng plot. The twist and thrills you put in your story did not disappoint. Your characters are the opposite of each other yet the chemistry you put makes them, well... similar? I guess I love how he thrill parts get my hyped in my seat. even though your story is
thriller you seem to slightly slow the pace down.
@amarelo_anxo
Nagustuhan ko po yung pagiging mysterious ng ibang character at ang pag-add mo ng thrill sa nga chapters mo. I also liked your dialogues at ang nga pinaparating ng characters mo.
@wizvisionary: pang action movie ang dating ng book na ito
@yhumckue: I love reading your story. Nakakatuwa siya. Kinakabahan ako sa susunod na mangyayari eh. Actually isa pa lang ang nababasa ko sa mga gawa mo. Kagabi ko lang kasi nakita, nakakaagaw pansin Thank you and Godbless. I really hope matapos n'yo po itong story n'yo.
@falloutgirl: Ang ganda, kakaiba siya sa mga ibang nabasa ko.
Kayin: Sobrang hilig ko rin sa action, actually yun talaga ang forte ko. May napansin lang ako sa capitalization mo. But overall, it's good. May mga tanong kaagad na tumatanim sa 'kin as a reader na, "Bakit kaya?" At maganda yan since detective story 'tong kwento mo. Fighting!
@EmpressRussiAlmira
Magaling kang mag-introduce ng characters. Halata na kung ano ang magiging role at ugali nila sa iyong gawa. Gusto ko ang iyong idea sa mystery halatang bihasa ka na sa mga ito.
@Rittsua
I like that there's always a touch of mystery in every chapters which suits well the genre itself. I like you characterization, their attitude and personality was solified, I mean they're not changing as story goes on. And The dialogues they're catchy and align to the genre.
@heavenSif
I am a fan of mysteries, and solving cases. Naghihintay nga akong may lumabas na code para masolve like different code, cipher, like ko talaga magsolve and you don't believe lahat ng stories ko about solving cases like Sherlock Holmes, string of death by Rebecca, and etc. Sobrang ganda ng stories mo. I hope tuloy tuloy ka pang gumawa ang stories.
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The Culprit (UNDER REVISION)
Mystery / ThrillerHe is a Police Inspector. She is a Secret Agent. They're two different people and have two different personality but having similar job, sharing same passion and interest, they always end up being together. Their mission is to find the number 1 in...
